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Really fun

Really enjoyed the game, quite challenging on some levels. Big thumbs up

What the??

This has to be one of the worst tuts i have seen, you have not done anything at all.

Firstly it takes too long to laod, perhaps compressing the song
Mochiads do not work on things like this
It is too sort and rubbishy
You should of included how to make the cheat proof, as other wise people can cheat at mouse avoiders

next time, make a desent tutorial, as to be honest, this is extremely basic, crappy, and teaches nothing about Actionscript. You dont cover the different possibilites, nor do you cover tweening either

TriForce12 responds:

If you use tweening creation of these games without causing bugs etc. becomes very difficult, if not impossible. I am only 13 years old, 1 negative from you doesn't compare to the encouragement that I have recieved from other on NewGrounds.

P.S. You would be wise to learn correct grammar and a grasp of the English language before you criticize. People in glass houses etc...

W00t

All levels are possible, except for level 20. I have the pass but wont say :D if any does please say so, asi realy want to do it :D

Good first game

I must say this is a good first game *clap* *clap* if i were u though i would add your own right-click menu, if u pm i could send you script for it so then ppl can't cheat and also having the cirlcle as a mouse hmm, i woulld maybe have it as just the outline and place dot in middle so ppl can see the centre and know where the clicking.

Also you could maybe do some short story clips and make it a good game. Also try improving the scrolls with the messages so it lloks better, also i know u only spent 3 dyas but maybe make it flow from one part to another instead of on or off, add some fading. Also when u kill sum1 maybe add a blood stained screen wiht blodding running down and make it look cooler.

Top tips:
1) Add right click menu-PM me for the script
2)Improve graphics:death, lvl change, story movies and message chooser(add a apartment and ability to upgrade)
3) Keep up good work and try to get sponsored as well as it could become a really fun game

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